A few years ago I visited an exhibition of Victorian painting at the Royal Academy in London. The painting, The Entomologists’s Dream, 1909, by Edmund Dulac inspired me to write a prose poem. I was so struck by the devastation on the butterfly collector’s face that I felt compelled to create his back story. Although I didn’t know it at the time, Dulac’s original painting was an illustration for a tragic love story.
This work is an illustration for Le Papillon Rouge (the red butterfly) by Gerard d’Houvillehe. The tale explores the supernatural potential of dreams and the hallucinatory power of a moonlit night.
My poem is a riff on the powerful and sometimes devastating effect of dreams, and last month I got the delightful news that it had been shortlisted in the Fiction Factory poetry competition. The judge was none other than my tutor from Jericho Writers, Helen Cox. The competition was judged blind so she got a (I hope) nice surprise when she discovered I was the author. I hope you enjoy the poem! In the end I felt sorry for the collector, after all, he was only trying to capture the transitory beauty of butterflies as I have attempted to do in my poem.
The Entomologist’s Dream
African Glass Blue, Cinnabar Moth,
Fiery Copper, languish inside glass chambers
their wings pinned against velvet.
A soft-soled intruder carrying a hammer
steals in from the dreamer’s underworld.
Years. Collecting. Lost.
Desiccated wings ache into movement.
Antennae twitch, exoskeletons tremble,
pierced thoraxes inhale life-giving
breaths of sequestered air.
Camberwell Beauty and Painted Lady
jeté towards the open window.
The man’s body torques in anguish,
raging at his confetti of brides escaping.
Wait. Stop. Crouch.
The Koh-i-Noor of his collection
pauses and settles on the spreading board.
Hands cupped, he leap-frogs towards her.
His work table clatters on its side. All ajangle, tools
of his trade switch allegiance. The entomologist
stumbles back, trying to gain purchase
on a wall that’s now a ghost.
The killing jar breaks into starlight shards,
potassium cyanide kisses the night air,
but, Madagascan moon moth flies home.
Absolutely LOVE this. So so lyrically entrancing
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Thank you, Jan! Glad you enjoyed the poem.
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Absolutely LOVE this. So, so lyrically entrancing.
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Hi Angela, Tried to comment on your poem but for some reason had to log in. Anyway, my comment was
Great Angela! I love a happy ending! And so beautifully expressed
Sally
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Thank you, Sally, I always appreciate you hearing your comments, so great that you persevered 🙂
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